May 09, 2008

Birthday Greetings Part Two

Today, May 9, is the birthday of Charles Simic, Lucian Blaga, Dante Alighieri.

Most everybody knows Dante Alighieri, and lots of people know Charles Simic, but Lucian Blaga is probably less known to Americans. So let’s start with him.

Lucian_blaga Blaga (May 9, 1895 – May 6, 1961) was a renowned Romanian philosopher and poet. He seems to have had equal influence as both, in that eastern European intellectual way where you could be a philosopher, writer, university professor and a diplomat, as Blaga was. Andrei Codrescu has translated some poems by Blaga in At the Court of Yearning: Poems by Lucian Blaga.

He also seems to have defined the Romanian spirit and it’s poetic horizon—a definition of Romanian national identity—using a really old folk ballad called Mioritza—as a combination of environment and culture in an essay called the Mioritic Space.

In the ballad, there are three shepherds. The first shepherd, a Moldavian, is warned by his lamb (the enchanted ewe Mioritza) that the others are going to kill him because he is wealthy and has more sheep, intending to steal his riches and flocks. The Moldavian accepts this stoically as his fate, and asks the lamb to tell the other two shepherds to bury him in the meadow near his sheep, nature and the stars. He also asks Mioritza to tell the other sheep, the shepherd’s mother, everyone else that he has not been killed but that he married a prince's daughter at heaven's gate.

The space bounded by the sheep’s travels, and thus the boundary of where the story exists, was what Blaga called the Mioritic Space, and co-extensive with the boundary of Romania. The telling of the story creates at the same time the culture and environment of Romania within which the story exists.

It’s probably more complicated that that but you get the idea.

Here’s a poem in English translation:

May Gives Itself With Sweet Abandon
Lucian Blaga

We shall remember once, and too late,
This simple, yet fine, moment,
This very bench where we are seated,
Your burning temple next to mine.
From hazel stamens, cinders fall
White as the poplars they land on.
Beginnings want to be fecund:
May gives itself with sweet abandon.
Hills of gold ash rise around us,
The pollen falls on you and me—
Falls on our shoulders and our lashes,
Into our mouths when speaking,
On eyes, when we are silent with wonder—
And there’s regret—we don’t know
Why it would tear us from each other.
We shall remember once, too late,
This particular moment,
This very bench where we are seated,
Your burning temple resting on mine.
We can see in dreams, through our longing—
Latent in the golden dust—
These forests that could be
But that will never, never, grow.

Next, the Ted Williams of poets: Dante Alighieri (May 9, 1265 – September 14, 1321)

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I guess there’s some dispute about Dante’s exact day of birth, but what the heck. Let’s roll.

As we all know, DA occupies the same place in all of Italian historyslashculture that Blaga has in 20th Century Romania. He’s the man, the playmaker, the big cheese. T. S. Eliot’s favorite book of the Commedia was allegedly the Paradiso, but one can’t help thinking that, in some things, Eliot was kind of a jerk. Still it does have that socko ending:

Here powers failed my high imagination:
But by now my desire and will were turned,
Like a balanced wheel rotated evenly,

By Love that moves the sun and the other stars.

My original favorite-ish translation of the Commedia (XXXIII years ago) was Laurence Binyon’s, which Pound praised, and which Binyon wrote in an English version of terza rima. Nowadays there are lots of new translations of one or the other of books. I really enjoyed Robert Pinksy’s when it came out and still do. He made a point of talking about the difference between English and Italian by saying the Italian phrase in the first line of the Commedia “silva oscura” (five syllables) is “dark woods” (two syllables) in English, though both have two beats.

Bethatasitmay, here’s three short excerpts from my three favorite Cantos:

If, however, to learn the root
Of our love is now your own desire,
I will speak as one who weeps in speaking.

One day for our pleasure we were reading
Of Lancelot and how love captured him.
We were alone and innocent of suspicion.

Several times the words forced our eyes
To meet and stole the color from our faces.
But one single moment conquered us.

As we read how her long-desired smile
Was kissed by that hero and lover,
This man, never to be severed from me,

Trembling, leaned over, kissed me on the mouth—
The author of that book was a Gallehaut—
And that day we read no more.

-Canto V, Inferno

. . . afterward I saw
Two souls frozen in one hole so close
That one’s head served as the other’s hood.

As a hungry man chews on a hard crust of bread,
The one on top sank his teeth into
The other’s nape at the base of the brain.

Tydeus gnawed the head of Menalippus
With no more fury than this sinner showed
In gnawing at the skull of skin and bone.

You who by this sign of bestiality
Show hatred for the one whom you devour,
Tell me why,
I said; and for the favor,

If you have any reason for your grievance,
When I know who you are and what his sin,
I will pay you back in the world above

Unless my tongue should dry up in my throat.


Raising his mouth from his savage meal,
The sinner wiped his lips upon the hair
Of the head that he had chewed on from behind.

Then he began, You want me to make new
A desperate grief which even to call back
Crushes my heart before I start to speak.

But should my words become a fruitful seed
Of infamy for this traitor whom I gnaw,
You’ll see me speak and weep at the same time.


-Cantos XXXII & XXXIII, Inferno

A crown of olive over her white veil,
A woman appeared to me; beneath her green
Mantle she wore a robe of flaming red.

My soul, which for so long now
Had not felt as overwhelmed as when I’d stood
Trembling with fear in her presence,

Without seeing with my eyes
But by the veiled power she projected,
I felt the tremendous force of the old love.

The moment that uplifting power struck
My sight, as it had already pierced me through
Before I’d left my boyhood years behind,

I turned round to the left with the blind trust
Of a small child who races toward his mother
When panic hits him or he comes to grief,

To say to Virgil, There is not a drop
Of blood in me that is not trembling:
I recognize the signs of the old fire.


But Virgil — he had left me there bereft
Of himself — Virgil, my sweet father — Virgil
To whom I gave myself for my salvation!

Not even all our ancient mother Eve had lost
Could keep my cheeks, already washed with dew,
From turning dark once more with troubled tears.

Dante, because Virgil leaves you now,
Do not weep yet, do not weep yet, for you
Must weep for yet another pointed sword!


Like an admiral who goes to stern and prow
To see the crews that serve on other ships
And to encourage them to do good work,

So on the left side of the chariot —
When I turned, as I heard my name called,
Which I record here through necessity —

I saw the lady who first appeared to me
Veiled by the angels’ flower-festival
Fix her eyes on me from across the stream.

Although the veil that flowed down from her head
Which was encircled by Athena’s leaves
Did not permit her to be seen distinctly,

Like a queen unyielding in her look,
She went on like one who speaks and keeps
Back the most heated words until the end:

Look at me! I am, I am Beatrice!
How did you ever dare to climb this mountain?
Did you not know that people here are happy?

-Canto XXX, Purgatorio

'nuff said.

Speaking of Mount Purgatorio, May 9 is also the day (in the year 1336) that Italian poet Francesco Petrarch climbed Mont Ventoux. Dante was a big influence on Petrarch, and Petrarch in turn was a big influence on Elizabethans like Willy the Shake. Frank wrote a big long letter about it, which is part Purgatorio, part Confessions. And in the letter he in fact quotes:

Men go to admire the high mountains and the great flood of the seas and the wide-rolling rivers and the ring of Ocean and the movement of the stars; and they forget themselves.

-Augustine of Hippo

You can find the letter online if you’ve a mind to.

Finally, today is also the birthday of current Poet Laureate Charles Simic.

Simicentourax Here’s a couple of poems by Mr. Simic:

Eyes Fastened With Pins
Charles Simic

How much death works,
No one knows what a long
Day he puts in. The little
Wife always alone
Ironing death's laundry
The beautiful daughters
Setting death's supper table.
The neighbors playing
Pinochle in the backyard
Or just sitting on the steps
Drinking beer. Death,
Meanwhile, in a strange
Part of town looking for
Someone with a bad cough
But the address somehow wrong,
Even death can't figure it out
Among all the locked doors...
And the rain beginning to fall
Long windy night ahead.
Death with not even a newspaper
To cover his head, not even
A dime to call the one pining away,
Undressing slowly, sleepily,
And stretching naked
On death's side of the bed.

In the Library
Charles Simic

for Octavio

There's a book called
"A Dictionary of Angels"
No one has opened it in fifty years,
I know, because when I did,
The covers creaked, the pages
Crumbled. There I discovered
The angels were once as plentiful
As species of flies.
The sky at dusk
Used to be thick with them.
You had to wave both arms
Just to keep them away.
Now the sun is shining
Through the tall windows.
The library is a quiet place.
Angels and gods huddled
In dark unopened books.
The great secret lies
On some shelf Miss Jones
Passes every day on her rounds.
She's very tall, so she keeps
Her head tipped as if listening.
The books are whispering.
I hear nothing, but she does.

May 08, 2008

Vrzhu Birthday Greetings

"Laugh, and the world laughs with you. Cry, and the world laughs at you."

"I don't disagree with people.  I merely point out how wrong they are."

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Hwaet. It’s been a while since we’ve done birthday greetings here at Vrzhu, but today and tomorrow are jam-packed:

May 8, 1930 Gary Snyder
May 8, 1592 Francis Quarles
May 9, 1938 Charles Simic
May 9, 1895 Lucian Blaga
May 9, 1265 Dante Alighieri

So here’s our first installment: Gary Snyder

As For Poets
Gary Snyder

As for poets
The Earth Poets
Who write small poems,
Need help from no man.

The Air Poets
Play out the swiftest gales
And sometimes loll in the eddies.
Poem after poem,
Curling back on the same thrust.

At fifty below
Fuel oil won't flow
And propane stays in the tank.
Fire Poets
Burn absolute zero
Fossil love pumped back up.

The first
Water Poet
Stayed down six years.
He was covered with seaweed.
The life in his poem
Left millions of tiny
Different tracks
Criss-crossing through the mud.

With the Sun and Moon
In his belly,
The Space Poet
Sleeps.
No end to the sky--
But his poems,
Like wild geese,
Fly off the edge.

A Mind Poet
Stays in the house.
The house is empty
And it has no walls.
The poem
Is seen from all sides,
Everywhere,
At once.

Why I Take Good Care Of My Macintosh Computer
Gary Snyder

Because it broods under it's hood like a perched falcon
Because it jumps like a skittish horse
    and sometimes throws me
Because it is pokey when cold
Because plastic is a sad, strong material
    that is charming to rodents
Because it is flighty
Because my mind flies into it through my fingers
Because it leaps forward and backward
    is an endless sniffer and searcher,
Because its keys click like hail on a rock
& it winks when it goes out,
& puts word-heaps in hoards for me, dozens of pockets of
    gold under boulders in streambeds, identical seedpods
    strong on a vine, or it stores bins of bolts;
And I lose them and find them,
Because whole worlds of writing can be boldly layed out
and then highlighted, & vanished in a flash at
    "delete" so it teaches
    of impermanence and pain;
& because my computer and me are both brief
    in this world, both foolish, and we have earthly fates,
Because I have let it move in with me
    right inside the tent
And it goes with me out every morning
We fill up our baskets, get back home,
Feel rich, relax, I throw it a scrap and it hums.

Riprap
Gary Snyder

Lay down these words
Before your mind like rocks.
              placed solid, by hands
In choice of place, set
Before the body of the mind
              in space and time:
Solidity of bark, leaf, or wall
              riprap of things:
Cobble of milky way.
              straying planets,
These poems, people,
              lost ponies with
Dragging saddles --
              and rocky sure-foot trails.
The worlds like an endless
              four-dimensional
Game of Go.
              ants and pebbles
In the thin loam, each rock a word
              a creek-washed stone
Granite: ingrained
              with torment of fire and weight
Crystal and sediment linked hot
              all change, in thoughts,
As well as things.

I saw Gary Snyder at the Folger Library in 1995, and he was impressive.  I used two of my five words of Japanese, and he replied with about 20, which, or course, I didn’t know. We also talked about how we  liked the little moleskine notebooks. I wish we'd talked about fuseki, which is the pure poetry part of Go, but I was too shy.  In Go, the board is set so that the grain of the wood runs from one player to the other, rather than like a fence, dividing them.  This is to show that the two players are united in a common effort: the making of the game. The grain of a poem, too, should join the writer and the reader, from one to the other, in a united effort, the making of the poem.

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Anyway, he was completely charming. During his reading he recounted talking to some high-ranking economist who said that oil will never reach $100 a barrel. To which Gary Snyder replied, I don’t know. It just hit $50 a barrel, didn’t it?

Here’s a news item:

May 8, 2008. NEW YORK - Gasoline and crude oil jumped to new records Thursday, with gas rising 3 cents to an average national price of nearly $3.65 a gallon and oil crossing $124 a barrel for the first time.

Happy birthday, Gary.

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May 06, 2008

A-hem

Maybe it's the season, but I find myself becoming allergic to the trope "this poem is just prose broken up into lines." It seems to crop up on an irregular basis all over the place. Behind it I often catch the faint whiff of satisfaction at having exposed an imposter, the Emperor's new clothes.  And it crops up in discussions of what is "legitimately" poetry and what is not as a kind of Quod Erat Demonstratum -- the opponent is supposed to deflate in shame. Smug, smug smug.

It does, of course, mean absolutely nothing. It's sophistry and nonsense. It's like emptying all the gas and oil from a car, and, when it won't start, saying "Ah-ha, I told you this isn't really a car." Or taking the wings off a plane, crashing it, and saying "You see? Man was not meant to fly."

But the most cogent dismantling of this hobgoblin is something I have already posted here a while ago. I urge you to print it out and have it put on an index card to hand out when the pernicious "It's not poetry, it's cut-up prose" poltergeist shows up:

The poet is charged with failing to do something that he never intended. What the poet intended was for the reader to see with his eyes, hear with his ears, the divisions of the lines where they were placed, not for the reader to guess, from the order of the words alone, i.e., a prose paragraph, where the lines of verse should end. For writing to be read as lines of verse, all that is necessary is for the poet to indicate that they should be read so. If you aren't willing to submit to the poet's judgment, you needn't look or listen. There is no need to explain your unwillingness by trying to show a relationship between divisions of writing into verse-lines and the kind of language the poet is using.

–Louis Simpson, The Poetic Line: A Symposium in A Field Guide to Contemporary Poetry and Poetics

And from the same book, this:

The line is a unit of rhythm. The poet is moved by impulses of rhythm which he expresses in lines of verse. Impulse determines where each line breaks, and the impulse of the poem as a whole determines the look of the poem on the page or its sound in the air.

–Sandra McPherson, The Poetic Line: A Symposium in A Field Guide to Contemporary Poetry and Poetics

Of course, there are kazillion ways for a poem to fail, but, really, there are much more important things to talk about, even in the world of poetry.

Apr 20, 2008

Whither Thou Goest?

Napowrimo1779469 Is you've been wondering whether I've unsaddled myself from NaPoWriMoity, the answer is no. I'll be posting again tomorrow.  By the way the Poetry Foundation's Harriet blog's Ada Limon's post has a nice shout out to Maureen Thorson and NaPoWriMo.


And it looks like the Washington Post has finally caught up with National Poetry Month here and here and here and here and here and here and here and here and here and here and here and here and here and here and here.

By the way, May is National Victims of Poetry Month Month. Please give generously.

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Apr 14, 2008

Two Actual Dreams I Had Related to Poetry, and Where's NaPoWriMo?

Really I would tend to not share this stuff (I mean, dreams, really. Come on), but I thought this most recent one was shapely enough to be worth telling.  I wonder if there is some message in the progression of these two dreams--from getting advice to being a big Mahoff?

Poetry dream 4/11/2008)

So in my dream Kim Roberts has nominated me to be Poet Laureate of the United States! And, because she is so big deal influential, I am actually chosen to be Poet Laureate of the United States!

Turns out it’s a lot of paperwork.

The office is pretty small and piled up with all kinds of papers and books. I have to review a bunch of stuff.  Luckily my secretary, a spinsterish type, knows the job inside and out. She basically tells me what to do and I do it. I’m reading lists and handwritten manuscripts, and its not that bad, but it is certainly not what I’d envisioned. It’s a nine to five kind of thing but thank god for that spinster secretary, whoever she is.

Poetry Dream circa 2005

I meet, by accident, Gerald Stern. He’s sitting on a park bench and I’m like “Gerald Stern!” And end up pouring out all my doubts, what my poetry is like, what I’m trying to do. It must be pretty annoying but Gerald is totally cool. His advice is pretty straightforward and somehow incredibly relieving. He says something like “Keep doing what you’re doing. It’s sounds fine. Keep going.”

I somehow know from this encounter that I am or will be capable of writing poetry, what I’m doing makes sense, I won’t end in utter humiliation.

Pretty great guy in my dream, that Gerald Stern.

And a big thanks to Kim Roberts for nominating me to be Poet Laureate of the United States in my dream. I can only hope her faith in me is deserved

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So where's today's napowrimo? Just don't have it in me at the moment, and, frankly, I've been phoning it in for a few days now.

So I plan to saddle up again tomorrow, or so.

Until next time, take care of yourself, and each other.

Apr 12, 2008

Napowrimo Day 1100

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Apr 11, 2008

napowrimo day xi - and some divagations

P11 Oh hello there! Welcome to Uncle Vrzhu's clubhouse! Make yourself at home. Here at Uncle Vrzhu's clubhouse there's always a comfy seat by the fire in winter, and a cool breeze off the porch swing in summer.

Oh you weren't looking for Uncle Vrzhu's clubhouse? You just wanted to ask directions to . . . Silliman's Blog.

Ok, go out the way you came in, go to the left, keep going, keep going, keep going, keep going, and it's on the left. Enjoy! (batarde!)Pinky11

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So. Dear napowrimoers:

I (as corporate america leadership/teambuilding endeavors likes to say) challenge you. We're approaching the half way mark in napowrimo write-a-poem-a-day. Except for a brief  hiatus, I've been keeping pace.  Admittedly, I've had to post some  pseudo-aleatory sub-Ashbery crap (which I can do all day long, believe me), but nevertheless.

So. Take a look at your previous entries in the NaPoWriMo Iditarod. Here's the challenge:Clyde

--If you've been using first person pronouns (I, me), then you must write an equal number of daypoems without using any first person pronouns.

--If you haven't been using first person pronouns, then you have to write an equal number of poems using I, me, mine (no cheating by using quotemarks or other alienating devices)

--For extra credit, if you've been doing both, write an equal number of poems eschewing all personal pronouns (I, me, mine, you, yours, he, she, his, hers, theirs, them, we, ours, et cet) other than "it."

You must be as satisfied with the result as you have been with the rest of this month's poems. This is no mere prompt or constraint but gives us an opportunity to think (in poems) about how we relate to the self or a self in our poems, and how we deal in poems with that thorny problem. Since the majority of my poems tend to use a "lyric self persona," I am writing all these napowrimoems without using first person pronouns.  I started the month by using no personal pronouns at all, but I've been slipping.  And in my defense, I'm trying to catch up, so I'm giving myself a break.

Oh, and extra credit if you can identify the terrifying mythological creature at the bottom of the post. And extra extra credit if you write a poem about it.  With a cherry on top.

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Here's a review of J. G. Ballard's memoirs (from the LRB). Ballard convinced me when I was in my larval stage that poetry is possible in prose. His novels (The Crystal World, The Atrocity Exhibit, Crash) have some kernel in them similar to where poetry comes from.

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. . . And here's today's napowrimo.  And yes this counts as two poems, smartypants.  Do you know how hard it is to write this stuff?

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Just who is particpating as a napowrimower?

 

That's who.

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Apr 09, 2008

NaPoWriMo - SF - Poetry Readings

Napowrimo1779469I'm baaaaaaaaack.  From a long weekend in San Francisco (travel notes below). But first, back with renewed vigor and less despair to NaPoWriMo.  I'm about a week behind so here are two poems of the day for today. If I don't catch up by the 30th, I will write all the missing poems on that day.  I may rev up the contest again, but not right at the mo.  Also  a link to a post at the bottom that you must read.

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Other NaPoWriMo Links:

Will Brown Online
A Page of Woe Absolved
Perfect Lines
The Booth of Our Conniving
Bloof Blog
jump(s) the track(s)
Slim Windows
Book of Kells
Glamor Levels Hi
Homeschooled by a Cackling Jackal
fringe matters.
Laurel Snyder
Ivy is Here
water veiled
Womb Poetry
Bernadette Geyer
Readwritepoem
Carter's Little Pill
Watermark
Bee's Hovel
The Polka Dot Witch
Chicks Dig Poetry
The Package Insert of Sorrows
Carrie Etter
Dreamspot Dot Dot
Big Window
a wrung sponge
Blogging Poet
Heaven
Shann Palmer says
Stick Poet Super Hero
Versatile
Freak Machine Press
Mark Lamoureux
No Starting Point
Dragonfly on a Dog Chain
This is Not Made Up
Hyacinth Girls
For the Time Being
32 Poems
words intended as poetry
Forest River Journal
Lectitans
Carmen Gimenez Smith
Eric's Writing Corner
Possum
Beloved Dreamer
djkreutzer
August Avenue
freefalling me
GottaBook
A Window Within Myself
wjsullivan.net

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A confession.  Until this weekend, I had never set foot in San Francisco, or the State of California. We stayed in the Mission district (24th Street and Florida Street). And it was everything I like in a city: diverse, different, walkable, lots of local food, minimal chainstores of any sort, and bookstores. And spent most of the weekend in the Mission District, which was fine by me. Highlights of the weekend, in no particular order:

Phil's Coffee

Borderland Books

Kara's Cupcakes

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some stunning dance pieces at ODC

The church (in the Mission district) and cemetery where Scottie first meets Madeleine Elster. (in Vertigo)Stellarjay090306shaver_6859

A Steller's jay in the backyard (I'm pretty sure).

Some San Francisco conversations:

Entering Golden Gate Park

Dude: You looking for some weed?

Me: um, no.

(pause) Dude: You know that's a pretty typical question around here, right?

Me: um, yup. thanks.

Leaving Golden Gate Park

Different Dude: You look like George Lucas.

Me. Thanks. But I'm not. Probably.

At a club (as recounted)

Dude in pink shirt: Sometimes I curse like a maestro.

Much smarter young woman: I'm not sure I know what you mean by that.

Dude i.p.s.(dismissively): It's an analogy.

M.S.Y.W.: No, it's a simile. Maybe you need to take an SAT prep course. Or something.

Most interesting Streetfood:

A hot dog, wrapped in bacon, fried, then put on a bun, topped with a pile of lightly sauteed onion and green peppers, and then further topped with 3/4 of a cup of pickled jalapenos!

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Check out this post over at Mark Wallace's blog. It's on poetry readings, and it's wonderful.  We here often make fun of poetry readings, as well as poetry, poets, and poems (we kid because we care) but I couldn't agree more with what Mr. Wallace says here.Pleopod Segment_2 Cephalic Legs

Apr 03, 2008

April 3rd NaPoWriMo

Yesterday was one of those perfect days to be had in Washington in the spring or fall, the air delicious, and I don't know about you, but the desire to lie down in the evening outside in the grass somewhere was irresistible.

Then today, cold again.

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Before today's exciting poem off, a few announcements.

First, A great article in today's Washington Post about one of Vrzhu's favorite poets and people, Reed Whittemore. There's also a couple of PDF's - and introduction by Garrison Keillor and a poem of Whittemore's, Clamming. Well, done WP.  I don't know if the rest of us poets will have to wait until we are 88 for similar coverage, but we'll see.

I'm out of town this weekend Friday through Monday, and the possibility of posting on the road is pretty slim. I will continue to write and pick up on Tuesday or Wednesday with MoPoNaWri.  But I will put some posts in the hopper for your edutainment(TM).

If you have any ideas about what to do in San Franicisco with about 48 hours of time, let me know.  I'm thinking about this. If I can figure out public transportation, which goes something like this:

Transfer from any downtown BART station Embarcadero, Montgomery, Powell, or Civic Center to the Muni N-Judah OR transfer from Glen Park station to Muni bus #44-O'Shaughnessy or take N-Judah from Muni Metro station at Van Ness Avenue and Market St. OR take Muni #5-Fulton bus at McAllister and Polk Sts. OR take Muni #21-Hayes bus at Hayes and Larkin Sts. The #44-O'Shaughnessy bus stops near the front of the museum on Tea Garden Drive (southbound) and on Concourse Drive near the Academy of Sciences (northbound).

Now today's NaPoMoWriMoCo.

First, once again, here's how a poem advances to the next round:

1. Each day, a new poem will be accompanied by a poemaday poem from last year, and a poem from the previous day that has been voted.

2. Anyone may vote in the comments section for one of the poems. The losing poems are voted off the island.

3. The winning poem will be posted the next day with (a) a new poem and (b) a poem from last year's poemaday month.

4. In the event of a tie (such as no votes for anything) only that day's new poem will be proceed to the next round.

5. Poems not advancing to the next round will be consigned to the Hell of the Sticky Dragons.

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NAPOWRIMO LINKS:

Versatile Will Brown Online
A Page of Woe Absolved
Perfect Lines
The Booth of Our Conniving
Bloof Blog
jump(s) the track(s)
Slim Windows
Book of Kells
Glamor Levels Hi
Homeschooled by a Cackling Jackal
fringe matters.
Laurel Snyder
Ivy is Here
water veiled
Womb Poetry
Bernadette Geyer
Readwritepoem
Carter's Little Pill
Watermark
Bee's Hovel
The Polka Dot Witch
Chicks Dig Poetry
The Package Insert of Sorrows
Carrie Etter
Dreamspot Dot Dot
Big Window
a wrung sponge
Blogging Poet
Heaven
Shann Palmer says
Stick Poet Super Hero
Freak Machine Press
Mark Lamoureux
No Starting Point
Dragonfly on a Dog Chain
This is Not Made Up
Hyacinth Girls
For the Time Being
32 Poems
words intended as poetry
Forest River Journal
Lectitans
Carmen Gimenez Smith

Apr 02, 2008

April 2nd NaPoWriMo

Napowrimo1779469 Not just writing a poem a day, but subjecting them to the magnesium flare of public opinion! Or not! I call it Who Wants To Be America's Next Top Poem?

The Rules:

1. Each new poem will be accompanied by a poemaday poem from last year.

2. Anyone may vote in the comments section for one or the other poem.

3. The winning poem will also be posted the next day with (a) a new poem and (b) a poem from last year's poemaday month.

4. In the event of a tie (such as no votes for anything) only that day's new poem will be proceed to the next round.

5. Poems not advancing to the next round will be consigned to oblivion.

Last year's poem from NaPoWriMo:Top

{gone}

And this year's NaPoWriMo "poem" for the day:Turtle2

[gone, okay?]

And, with the polls closed, it's a landslide victory (100% voted for it) for yesterday's poem, which is:7137_press08001

[GONE]

You can help decide which help which poem above advances to the next round!

Will it be:

  • A History of the Surge Bucket Milker
  • Halp Mr. Wizard!
  • or Alien Hand Syndrome

???????????

You decide!

It's a democracy, people! Vote in the comments section! Pick the lesser of three evils!

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NaPoWriMo links:

Versatile

Will Brown Online
A Page of Woe Absolved
Perfect Lines
The Booth of Our Conniving
Bloof Blog
jump(s) the track(s)
Slim Windows
Book of Kells
Glamor Levels Hi
Homeschooled by a Cackling Jackal
fringe matters.
Laurel Snyder
Ivy is Here
water veiled
Womb Poetry
Bernadette Geyer
Readwritepoem
Carter's Little Pill
Watermark
Bee's Hovel
The Polka Dot Witch
Chicks Dig Poetry
The Package Insert of Sorrows
Carrie Etter
Dreamspot Dot Dot
Big Window
a wrung sponge
Blogging Poet
Heaven
Shann Palmer says
Stick Poet Super Hero
Freak Machine Press
Mark Lamoureux
No Starting Point
Dragonfly on a Dog Chain
This is Not Made Up
Hyacinth Girls
For the Time Being
32 Poems
words intended as poetry
Forest River Journal
Lectitans
Carmen Gimenez Smith

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